Bloodline 172
Making up for the lack of text over the last several pages XD
The raffle stream went great, and it’s looking like we’ll have 2 more next month!
Also, I have more Fanart to share!
Making up for the lack of text over the last several pages XD
The raffle stream went great, and it’s looking like we’ll have 2 more next month!
Also, I have more Fanart to share!
Guess this means Callum and Gale are truly dead 🙁
Gale almost certainly, Callum I hope not and don’t think so. It was implied that he was still alive back on page 170,
http://w0lfmare.xepher.net/comic/bloodline-170
So I’m thinking and hoping that he pulls through when Bernin gets let loose.
Hopefully…
I don’t understand. If she thinks his bloodline is weak, and if he won’t show up to take that artifact from them, it will further prove that he’s weak. Why senseless threats? It’s not in their interest to motivate him to show up.
Presumably they (or she) actually WANT him to demonstrate his strength. The threats are likely intended as insurance to ensure that he does so.
I must say the first thing that struck me is your art is pretty good for a new comic, only real problem is everyone seems to have their paws glued to the ground and a broomstick for a spine but posture and flexibility are difficult to draw and will come with practice. Most of the comics I read nowadays had much rougher starts than this.
What I did find grating is your grammar. Constant confusion of several homonyms such as their/there/they’re and your/you’re, noticed you used “loose” instead of “lose” at one point, and “it’s” ONLY ever means “it is” or “it has”. There is no apostrophe when denoting possession for “it”, eg “This book’s cover is stained and its pages are torn.”
After all, “A capital letter is the difference between helping your uncle Jack off a horse and helping your uncle jack off a horse” lol. Should be an easy fix =)
I’m intrigued to see where this comic goes and otherwise did enjoy what was here so far =) Keep it up.
Why did you take my last comment down?
I do appreciate you standing up for me, but I can take the criticism. Even if it’s a little harsh, it can be helpful, and I don’t want to discourage it.