What kind of mark is that on Embers hand?
And bdw, the dude on the door dosent looks that heavy,
if Ember can carry books n stuff,the damadged rip isnt too bad…
unless ember dosent feel this hurt cause of some adrenalin,
then she could carry both, but after 30-60 minutes, it will hurt as ****.
Your letters are sadly right…
I guess Bernin is one of her last hopes…
Bernin or magic…
You write the Embers feelings very visible,
a single look is enough to feel with her…
Dude, (or Dudine?) you deserve repeated Hand clapping sounds! =D
It’s incredible how much your Artwork improved since the beginning, especialy in the last 10 pages!
Speaking if the artwork. The shading you did gave the comic a nice sense if depth especially on the faces. And the colors behind the comic panels themselves is a nice touch. Where it starts at a brown because of the wood inside then changes shades to a green because she went outside. It’s really nice. Its srange how colors play a role in how we perceive things like pictures and videos. Great job on this one!
What kind of mark is that on Embers hand?
And bdw, the dude on the door dosent looks that heavy,
if Ember can carry books n stuff,the damadged rip isnt too bad…
unless ember dosent feel this hurt cause of some adrenalin,
then she could carry both, but after 30-60 minutes, it will hurt as ****.
Even if she wasn’t hurt, she couldn’t carry Cole fast enough to get away from Flint. As for the mark on her hand, it’s a mystery she’s yet to solve!
Your letters are sadly right…
I guess Bernin is one of her last hopes…
Bernin or magic…
You write the Embers feelings very visible,
a single look is enough to feel with her…
Dude, (or Dudine?) you deserve repeated Hand clapping sounds! =D
It’s incredible how much your Artwork improved since the beginning, especialy in the last 10 pages!
Thank you, encouraging comments like this always make my day ^^
My art at the beginning left much to be desired, so I try my best to improve and right my wrongs as the story progresses (And yeah, dude is correct).
Speaking if the artwork. The shading you did gave the comic a nice sense if depth especially on the faces. And the colors behind the comic panels themselves is a nice touch. Where it starts at a brown because of the wood inside then changes shades to a green because she went outside. It’s really nice. Its srange how colors play a role in how we perceive things like pictures and videos. Great job on this one!
Thanks ^^